MacOitir

The story's really picking up. You've either written a few chapters ahead or you have a scary amount of discipline. The rate your updating this story at is making me ...

I'm really liking this story so far. Your writing is fresh and conversational so it's not too heavy. I liked the little details about Olivia's first dad to show a ...

That was dark. Scarily so. I really like the idea and your writing is good, especially in the paragraph about them first meeting, but I've a few problems with it. ...

I don't have much constructive to say, but I like your casual style and your concept. I think the idea of the Novites is good, it's relevant and plays on ...

Lovely poem. I don't really have any criticisms so this review won't be of much use to you but I'll post anyway. It's got a natural flow, its themes are ...

Hey greatman, like the other reviewers I was drawn in by the title. To be honest I was expecting a fantasy story, not a seedy shoot up but I enjoyed ...

There's not much I can say without seeming redundant, but I really liked this story. Your descriptions brought the forest alive and I especially liked how you portrayed the woodcutters ...