MKate

I'll definitely edit those nitpicks out, and I see what you mean about the run on sentence- thanks for the advice! I'll be posting the next addition soon. Glad you ...

Love the point of view, you did a great job with this poem! My mom thinks puppets (especially marionettes) are scary, clowns too, she puts on her 'never buy these ...

Writing the two words instead of the contraction in description or other wise is all fine and dandy, and does make the work look more professional in the long run, ...

Ha! Nice, I liked it! Only thing: "He scurried away also" the 'also' is an unneeded word, 'tis my opinion that the poem would flow better without it. Keep writing! ...

Hey, if you don't want to add more, then don't! I really don't like it when someone asks me to write more of a thing that I'd rather just let ...

Thanks for all the advice everyone, it's deeply apreciated!

Thanks, Lily! *hugs*

I love the Redwall books, my brother and I have read them to ragged shreds! :D

Little Women forever!

I'll definitely work on the end... Thanks, June! :smt111 !syadiloH yppaH (I wanted to see how it looked :)) ~Mel

Thanks, captain.classy! Saw your point- edited it in - smiled at the results :D Happy holidays! :smt111 ~Mel

Never (at least so far as I've read) has there been a Georgette Heyer that didn't have a happy ending, you'll love it! And the main guys are soooooo good- ...

What attracted you to her books? Mom brought one home from the library and I was bored. But I soon grew to love them for what they were. Most of ...

Thanks for the reviews, and I appreciate the CC (constructive criticism) :)

Thanks, Nate :D I've always felt so bad about stealing those lines- you've soothed my conscience. I see what you mean about the ands. Fixing! Or... fixed. What do you ...