MADD94

I Have to say that I really agree with what masquerade said. In addition to that, i think that either there wasn't enough of a solid meaning behind the piece, ...

Interesting! But wait she's still seven right, to be perfectly honest i think i would love to be back in second grade. I would live it up so much. But ...

nice. But also confussing, so he sells kids? and are they black like the slave trades in America from like forever ago or like the whole underground stiff that goes ...

This is pretty good but...What? I mean you didn't explain much and BBB says thats what your goin for, wich is fine. just what I'm wondering is if your gonna ...

you were thinking about john Lennon weren't you? because right after the guy who shot lennon did so, he sat down in central park and read catcher in the rye ...

awesome! I cant wait for part 3, is it just me or are Riley and Amanda's friend gonna hook up? i still think this is gonna make an awesome story ...

Ya but Myrddin what you have to understand is this is the way the boy expresses himself. it happens to a lot of people. i don't like reading about cutting ...

why wont Ronald be her friend? is he gonna be a complete "jerk" to her like every one else? really good chapter but i don't really like that last part... ...

nice, i like the first, i forget what their called, group of stanzas and the last. im wikid new to this sight too, check out my story