Lydia1995

Thank you for your comments! I like your idea to use 'trampled' I think I may use that! Glad you liked it :)

Thank you, glad you liked it! :)

Thanks for your comments! It's a haiku so it's restricted to 5-7-5 which is part of the challenge but I'm glad you still got a good picture :) Thank's for ...

Hey! Sorry I will get round to reviewing this! I just did in fact but I took so long YWS logged me out and then deleted what I had written! ...

Okay thanks everyone for your comments they mean a lot. In case anyone is interested I based this on a monlogue that I read recently which really hit home to ...

Navita- Thanks for your comments. I found myself sort of running out of ideas and pushing to extremes and I think that maybe why it was like that for you. ...

Thanks Irish! I'm thinking of doing another one, this time Making a Sandwich. I'm thinking of ideas at the moment :) I'll tell you when I post it.

Hehe! Thanks Snoink for those word of wisdom! (note to self sad/depressing is not necessarily a failure it is just deep!) :lol:

Thanks guys! Snoink- yeah I see where you are coming from, I kind of failed with the ending. I was thinking maybe the person could be some sort of alien ...

Thats, quite alright :) I hope I helped :D

Ok spy, I hope I helped. It's cool that you're learning a new language :) I'm doing french but I'm definately not good enough to write a poem in it ...

Thanks to you both, I will address those issues when I get time. ~Lydia

Thanks to you both. Emorykings I would remove the Something but the lines have to follow the pattern of 5 syllables then 7 then 5 again. Thats the pattern of ...

Thanks to you both. :D Kanade I will PM you if I ever write anymore Haiku. Jane, I also thought that line was a little off, I will see what ...

Thanks to the both of you, these were really helpful comments :D Thanks for the suggestion about finding a thread on commas, I never really know where to put them! ...