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Hi, I'm Emma and I'll be your reviewer :) My eyes fly open, and I look around, my husband's back presses against mine, as I prop up on my elbow, ...

I thought seeing as we were pming so much I'd review some of your work :) I really like this poem! Fresh use of haikus that I haven't seen in ...

Hi! I'm Emma and I'll be reviewing today :) I'll analyse it bit-by-bit and then give my overall thoughts at the end Iknow there are mistakes i just want to ...

I know this really isn't what this forum is for but I am really wondering. Has anyone ever heard of the TV show Veronica Mars? What happened is it was ...

I honestly can't really nitpick this. The other commenters seem to have done that quite enough, but I felt that I had to comment because I really enjoyed it. For ...

Do you know you posted this twice:

Do you know you posted this twice:

Hi! I'll start the nit-picking and give you my overall impressions at the end :D I had a co-ed name Co-ed? What is that? I thought that was short for ...

I;ll keep this one brief, basically the rhythm and rhyme scheme didn't really work for me in lots of places. I like the couplets though, and the overall plot is ...

Oh, it's a shame the first wasn't yours, that was my favourite ha ha! Well I think you need a little bit of work on rhyme and rhythm, for example: ...

I liked this piece, you wrote it (as the first commenter stated) it was straight-forward and well-written. However, you lost me at the end. I sort of expected a lot ...

This is just a short one because it seems like your piece has been critiqued a lot. Chap. 1 Absently, I twirled the fork around and around until it created ...

"No." I lied, digging into my bottom lip with my front teeth and avoiding the sight of her marvelous, hazel eyes, both growing wide as moons. "Growing wide as moons" ...

Interesting short play, could be quite funny on stage. Seems like it could be in a set of shorts about silly little teenage things, such as not forwarding text messages ...

And god, two day stubble looked good on him. 'god' should be capitalised. Jake: In that case I'll keep pushing XD jake: Tell me. Tell me now goddamnit. That could ...