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Re: Innocence is a Daisybed
Hiya Kamas! Reviewer here, as requested! Well. I don't really have anything to say about it, except for the fact that it was pretty confusing. The first part wasn't but ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Pushing Fate...A kinda Percy Jackson Spin off
Hey Fly! What I noticed here was that you had a LOT of G.U.M.S errors. If I point them all out, this review would be way too long. I also ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Rise
I agree, it's very original. What I did like about it was how you did your syllables. They got longer and longer within a stanza and it stayed consistent. Keep ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Do angels cry in heaven?
Oh. My. Gosh. I'm a very nit-picky person, and I can find tiny little things wrong in almost everything I read. But this-this is FLAWLESS. The way the words flow, ...
Jul 2, 2010 -
Re: The Dance
Hiya Samsal! My name is Star, and I'll be your reviewer for today! I was thinking a few things here. The first one was that you probably threw this together ...
Jul 2, 2010 -
Re: Talking to God
Wow! This was a great poem! I really liked the expression and feeling in it. It's short and quick, but it's amazing how much you squeezed in! I can't wait ...
Jul 2, 2010