LuckyStar

Hiya Kamas! Reviewer here, as requested! Well. I don't really have anything to say about it, except for the fact that it was pretty confusing. The first part wasn't but ...

Hey Fly! What I noticed here was that you had a LOT of G.U.M.S errors. If I point them all out, this review would be way too long. I also ...

I agree, it's very original. What I did like about it was how you did your syllables. They got longer and longer within a stanza and it stayed consistent. Keep ...

Oh. My. Gosh. I'm a very nit-picky person, and I can find tiny little things wrong in almost everything I read. But this-this is FLAWLESS. The way the words flow, ...

Hiya Samsal! My name is Star, and I'll be your reviewer for today! I was thinking a few things here. The first one was that you probably threw this together ...

Wow! This was a great poem! I really liked the expression and feeling in it. It's short and quick, but it's amazing how much you squeezed in! I can't wait ...