LuckiestLoser

I agree with BFG the first two stanzas don't really hold my attention and seemed slightly ordinary, but i really did love the last line. I like how it sounds ...

I thought this was a very good poem. You managed to write about something quite controversial without making it sound too innapropriate. From the title i didn't expect to read ...

I thought this was well written and very good. It really seemed to get inside the head of the girl in the poem. Whether intentional or not, I think your ...

I have to say I really enjoyed this and I don't know whether it was your intention or not, but it read like Harry Potter and I think you captured ...

I really liked this. I think it read like the actual Harry Potter books. It made me want to keep reading more like Rowling does ever so well. The only ...