Lucia

When I wrote "bow" and "strings" I actually meant a violin. The poem itself is meant to be symbolic of a life. Thanks for reviewing!

Your welcome! Keep me posted for the next installment!

You're welcome!

P.S. Welcome to YWS! :)

Hi CatherinKanya!! Thank you for your complements! I wrote this poem more easily than I write anything, honestly. At the risk of sounding cheesy, the words really just came to ...

Thank you! This came straight from the heart, and though I don't really have any experience with poetry, I decided to try it out. Anyhow, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ...

I accidentally submitted this again, so if anyone knows how to delete it, please do. :)

This is a pretty good start, with a full background of suspense. You didn't jump too quickly into character background, besides the occasional reference. I'm a little confused over Griffin's ...

You're very welcome!!! :D

Oh, so that's what you meant by a "line". Ok. Got it!

Anytime!! Looking forward to your next chapter!! :)

You're welcome! Can't wait to read the rest!

You're welcome!! I think the beginning of the book is a good place for it. But that's just my opinion. :)

Anytime!