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I read your edit, and it's sounds much nicer to me. :) I'm just going to let you know that a couple of times, you call the "girl" a "woman". ...

I'll just label Andrew as the "mystical" character for now. :) You're making me excited for the twists... :) I get it now.... Yeah, I didn't connect the spiders in ...

You're very welcome!

That emoticon didn't exactly work... I shall retype it... "( :D ) There we go. :)

Again, no problem! Computers have this uncanny ability to create lots of unneeded stress. ;) *blushes profusely* I'm not really used to being called awesome, so, "again", (:D) Thank You ...

Haha, I'm definitely not a genius, not matter how much I wish to be... ;) But I thank you so much for your high compliments! Also, thank you for your ...

You're certainly welcome to a review from me anytime! I enjoyed your work a lot, and I'm glad my review helped!

Hi Mygecko1, I think you meant to comment on the literary piece instead of my review, am I correct? If so, do you see the large gray box which is ...

Hi IceWinifredd, I'm glad I could be of so much help! I always try to give the characters a little bit of room to develop before passing too much judgment, ...

No problem! That's what I'm here for- to review your works and to help you in whatever way I can! So you don't have to apologize. :) Also, I find ...

You're very welcome! I love point-of-view switches!!! I'm definitely reading the next ones! Cheers!

I'm curious... What were the five words?

Hey TheWanderingWizard, I'm glad you enjoyed my work! I'm also glad that you understood it so well. I was a little worried that people would get caught up in the ...

Don't ruin your plot! I was just curious. :) The thing about the colors of her clothes is, if her powers are thermal based, all of her clothes should appear ...

Thank you! Those are exactly the emotions that the reader is meant to feel, so good job interpreting it! Cheers to you!