Lucia

Very deep and dark. I enjoyed your writing ability, especially in your long, but necessary descriptions. In fact, those descriptions, if, at times, somewhat dark and realistically disgusting (no offen

Hmm... Very dark, this one. :) There are lots of underlying emotions; hopelessness, fear, and uncertainty to name a few. I'm just saying, the characters have gotten a bit more ...

Here we go! Again, a very intriguing, interesting story! Your placement of words and vocabulary have a nice, understandable meaning to them, if you know what I mean. For example, ...

I'm gonna start off by saying that this story does have a lot of potential. I can't really comment on the characters, as I don't know very much about them ...

Oh Wow..... That... subtly sneaked up on me. :) For a short piece, this one left quite an impression! I really expected this to be another "love-at-first-sight" thing, but you ...

Hmmm.... interesting. Pretty nice job expressing the emotional ranges of all your characters. Nice job on your overall writing; there weren't too many grammatical or spelling mistakes. Pretty typical

I just want to say, this was so good that I was just going to like it and leave it at that. But then, I realized that I wouldn't be ...

This seems to be a prologue, and, if it is, the plot works brilliantly to create suspense. Good job! I am liking this story so far, and I think that ...

Wow. This is really good! You literally took my imagination on journey to the land of your dreams. I like the word formatting, shape and such. Your language fit the ...

Hello! It took me a while to get this review going, sorry. :) But anyways, I'll take a whack at it. There were a couple things in here that made ...

Hello again! As I read this, I had to smile every time Eden described Katie. I especially liked the "chipmunk" one... :) In fact, I ended up laughing pretty hard ...

Whoa.... that was.... wow. (This is meant in a good way, just so you know) I'm just taking it in... seemingly normal day, then randomly meeting someone you've always wanted ...

Hi! Okay, so I'm gonna start by saying that you had an interesting mix of normal and unique going here, what with the whole magical color changing and the family ...

Again, before I continue, I would like to remind you of my lack of knowledge concerning Doctor Who. I can tell that you wrote some more references into the script, ...

I'm gonna start off by saying that I haven't seen much Doctor Who. So, I'll review this as well as I can, but please, pardon my lack of knowledge on ...