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Love the idea! Very original. I like how it comes full circle. Kind of makes me wonder what his parents were named, lol. I don't have much in the way ...

Just to re-emphasize a bit, poetry doesn't need to rhyme. It does, however, need to be poetic.If you sacrifice the latter for the sake of the former, it's not really ...

So confusing! Who is Zetta? Who is Shizue? Why is it bad that Shizue has revealed to the MC that she had gained the humans' support for the MC? It ...

Surprisingly, not bad! :) Haha, so far, every second person story I've read has been horrible. Even the fames literary classics you study in school, no one seems to be ...

Hey there, Juls! You've got an interesting bit of story here. Not quite sure what to call it. It starts like a story, but ends like a blurb. It's also ...

Extremely interesting story. I'm curious, are you planning to do more with it? On the pills, how far back do they age? I'm guessing they stop at their twenties, but ...

Aha, Warrior Cats! My sister reads that series. :) I think she has all the books out so far, lol, even the graphic novels and cats of the clan-type books. ...

Bodies of Angad and many other were never recovered after the great waves of Tsunami engulfed them.But their memories, and their love, continue to support the lives of their families... ...

Wow! Long post! Before I go into the critique, here's a quote: ...the most you should post at one time is something around the length of 1,500 words, which is ...

My first instinct was to link you to a talking heads article in the knowledge base ^^ but then I saw that it's the same person, just different thoughts. It's ...

Who knew it would rain? Seattle is known for its rain, so much so that it's almost a stereotype. It's always raining Seattle, just like it's always sunny is Florida ...

The Villa, by Nora Roberts. Supposedly, it's supposed to be a romance, but I'll never know. 150 pages into it, and she's still introducing all of the characters at an ...

Counting the days since the ship had departed had been hopeless. By day seventeen, or was it eighteen, she had resigned. An alternate version would be: Counting the days since ...

"Hello? What? Oh my God! I'm on my way!" Seems a little extreme/rushed for just a swollen ankle. :P I expected some huge car wreck or something. Maybe have here ...

Wow! An original twilight piece for once! I'm impressed. Normally, it's a cheesy re-do of Meyer's plot, a Bella and Edward and sometimes Jacob scene. It sounds like you've got ...