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I'm speechless. At the beginning I was cheering for Kyle when he got up! I knew you couldn't kill him! It was all joy, joy, joy! And then no one ...

NO, NO, NO! I mean, how can you do that? How is it that you can grow a character so well, make your readers fall in love with him and ...

WOO-HOO! :D That's all I can say. I love chionophobia stories, and am in love with the characters. I came in on #26 and had to go back to #1. ...

There's nothing I can say that hasn't been said already, but it was pretty good. :) The ending was my favorite part, and I'm wondering what happens next. There were ...

Hey there, Amber lee! There are a couple goofs along the way, yes, and I agree that you should prolong it a bit. But first with the goofs! :D wher ...

Hello! Hey Erin, great prologue! Okay! I thought this was great, and I can't wait to read more about her. :D However, there are a couple of goofs: My life ...

I loved it, and am VERY glad you're continuing the story! :D I see you've taken the comments from last time to heart, but there is one instance where you ...

I LOVED that book! After I read those two books, I went and read the ones about her mother, Alana. They were good too. I also got to understand her ...

I love your poem, but this section: Kapittle, kapattle, Kapittle, dittle, dattle, Pitter, patter, Fritter, fratter Fingle berry; WHOOP! kinda broke away from the poem I think. I loved the ...

I love this prologue. It hooked my attention and held it through out. It's fantastic. My mind is still going on about it. I'm at a loss for words at ...

Hey, Amber Lee! You have a great story here! let me just give you a few tips. :D Finnegan “Ouch” shrieked Finnegan as aphelia pulled off a huge leech. “Why ...

I agree with BFG as far as beginnings and endings go. It was meant to be a short story, and it leaves room for imagination. I think that if you ...