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I'm slow, but it's my own fault for forgetting all about you. Sorry 'bout that. I really liked the wording of this entire piece. I think someone already mentioned how ...

:twisted: I'm ba-ack. 1. Derek -- DUDE. This is like something Sara Douglass would write. She's my favorite author, so that's a good thing. Awesome, really. Keep writing. You'll top ...

JAMES (incredulously) You did, didn't you? You mean, "You didn't, did you?" right? It could work as it is now, but it threw me off a bit. But then, it's ...

Wow! This was fast! Many, many kudos for your speed and quality with this one. :) Lena comes down the stairs in a panic, holding two dresse d ALEX Are ...

Outside I star walking for home, it’s just a few blocks away and dark enough no one can see me cry. ;) Very well done... very emotional as well. I ...

Haha, this was great. As has already been said, I’m liking the continued jokes. But don’t lose the one-liners completely. Since the humor of the first shows mainly consisted of ...

XD The entire first scene had me laughing. If nothing else, these stories have taught me how to laugh without voice to avoid waking every one and every thing in ...

Derek , that’s my name and this , is my story. haha... I blinked a couple times at that. Name sharing aside, change the first bold comma to a period. ...

SUNSHINE Lena, the options were light and sharp or dark and blurred! Good ol' Sunshine... :D LUKE I'm not trying your nuts. Haha! ALEX (CONT'D) We're have a little trouble. ...

Sir, I am going to sleep. JAMES Well that was…subtle… XD And the orange juice... And Sunshine and Alex again... Great ending. I can't wait to read the next one ...

Okay, I swear. This is it. Then I'm going to sleep. *ahem* Luke, clearly miffed, tries not to let it bother him, but eventually props himself up and looks over ...

I saw it online this morning 'fore I left for class, but I didn't have time to sned it. ;) Ann forces herself to smile and then slightly pushes her ...

Nice. The tension build up was especially good, and the scenes of the present were well placed, adding to it. Climax was very well done. :) A man screams. Kevin ...

Chapter 1 The Coming Sota was sitting on his bed studying. The final exams were coming up and he need to get the best score in his class. It was ...

When one is supposed to be writing a college level essay, one should not be reading the cray-on lay-onds, period. It has dangerous effects on one's writing. That said, this ...