Young Writers Society

Hello number four! Hehe, more fun times. I'm just going to pretend that James is coming back. We cannot loooooose him!

Favorite-ness:

LENA
What the hell are you wearing, Sunshine? You look like you're about to throw hen scratch in the yard.

LENA
Uhm, consistency? You mean complexion? I'm practically the complexion of cottage cheese. If I were the consistency of cottage cheese--

ALEX
(interrupting)
I know what consistency is.

LENA
--my tits would be rolling off, or in a lasagna…or rolling around in a lasagna.

LENA
(whispering to Luke)
You should take note: he likes it rough…and country.

Jeremy nods and sits back down, glancing to the waiter as he sets down their food.

JEREMY
I'll just take the check.

LENA
Yeah, we'll miss you…I'm sure Luke will too, even if he isn't here.

The orange juice totally reminded me of my family. That was funny, I like how close all of the characters are. Okay...now, for James and Luke. *sigh* They're so adorable together and always say funny things. I mean, they almost seem like one person when they're together and in front of other people. It's cute. Buuuut, James and Mandy? Ew! She's such a freak I just wanted to push her out the door. She created like four awkward silences throughout the entire time she was there. I was waiting for Lena and Sunshine to just kick her but out of there. Who does she think she is? ....okay. Calm. Now for the sadness. Luke and James must be together, it's supposed to happen. They remind me of Jon and Kyle 0.0. I want happiness for them! I'm going to bother you about it when I finish reading the rest, okay? Okay.

Onto the next!
~Rieda

So! The question is when will there be a raunchy sex make up scene between you-know-who. But really! They're such a cute couple together. Too bad both of them have psychotic girlfriends... and James is leaving! Eep! How will their romance ever survive???

Or something like that.

But yeah. Alex = creepy. But I think Mandy would out-creep him out. Seriously... psycho much?

...now! For part 5!

Sir, I am going to sleep.

JAMES
Well that was…subtle…

I can't believe James is leaving! Crazy. *pouts* He'd better be back.. That's like when they went and made Daniel ascend on SG-1. Terrible. Though, I do have to say I'd certainly never pass up an opportunity like that if I were in his position.

On a different note, another great episode. Nice job keeping up the suspense through out it

Still hate Alex. Luke is an idiot and I'm not happy with him right now. With that I shall end my comments.

Looking forward to the next one as usual.

~Rea

Yay it's another one!

I love it. James will be back, right? Of course he will be! Or I shall cry, and I'm sure you're aware of how utterly ick crying women are. So! James must return. I'm not heppy with Luke, silly little boy. - He's really just upset James is going, of course.

(see how I read deep between the lines? xD)

This was brilliant. Major points for:

"LUKE
Well, I might tell her just because you ended that sentence with a preposition. "

Hehehehe, propositions might, or might not, be a little thing of mine. ^^

Again, I insist you write more, my lovely Minx. ^^

I so look forward to the rest!

*Hearts* Le Penguin.