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Re: Falling Solo
Perfect poem! I love how you used a relatable situation. There are always times when you have dreams where you are falling and this poem describes this situation perfectly. I ...
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: Twisted Poems- If I die tonight
Wonderful poem. Perfection. I usually don't get very hooked on poetry but this one really was amazing. I loved how you began most lines with the same four words, "If ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Home Sweet Home
Hey! Great story! Very interesting plot and I would love to see more. I like how you have a prologue because most stories do not and it sets this story ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Revolution
Very creepy story and suspenseful. I enjoyed how you put a twist on a normal childhood game and made a situation in which the popularity if a group of people ...
Nov 19, 2014
