LoveableLittleSock

Down my cheeks my eyes rain, All of my aching pain, That's gathered after all the years, Tears of happiness, joy, and fear. First off, I think you should change ...

Hello hello hello hello :] I liked this poem a lot, I thought it was very clear how you felt about whom you were speaking you. It flows really well, ...

Jaw clenched, I turned up the radio , as if it would keep him from noticing me. *Lady GaGa drowned out the sound of my windshield wipers keeping the hail ...

Hallo hallo :3 How are you today, sweetheart? Let me first start off that I'll be paying attention to little technical errors, so don't be afraid when you see a ...

Phenomenal piece of work, Mars. I'm not going to try to dig up or pretend you've done anything wrong, so I'll just tell you how much I loved it :] ...

stairs and the let up your ger If you do it just right self Stag it won't hurt. fall. Or maybe it will but it'll be worth it. So fall. ...

When you write a story, or a novel, you don't write your own songs. It's wonderful you wrote them, but honestly, when a somebody comes across an original set of ...

Sam gazed up the long hill on Main Street, and cocked her head to one side. She was straining to identify a troubling noise. Now, I really like this sentence. ...

This monster must surely be starved. From me, it continues to carve. You're forcing a rhyme, and not a very good one, no less. It's carving from within you, is ...

I started off thinking I wouldn't like this, but I did :] So yay, my first critique in months will be on something I liked. First off, let me start ...

I... but, he didn't need to... Huh? This story left me terribly confused and distraught, but in a good way! Now, let's review this, yeah? "So you're definitely sure you ...

Raspberry skies floating above each day Shining golden in the sun The start to your song is very pretty, and as a song it would be lovely to hear. On ...

The first day of every college or school year is a momentous event for my mother. She gets all worked up about it and half the time ends up crying. ...

In the early 1800s a group of young men, decided that they needed more in their [s]life[/s] lives . There is no need for the comma, and what are you ...

I live in a small , shitty apartment. It gets so cold in the winter that I avoid showering for fear my testicles might freeze to the side of my ...