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Re: The Measure of a Hero
This is a great story! First of all, you put in a really great message which shows through well. Second, you describe Kevin's emotions well and his motives. However, I ...
Dec 26, 2015 -
Re: The Mermaid
This story has so many good elements. Most importantly, the mood of the story is very strong. You really create the world you want the reader to be in. On ...
Dec 25, 2015 -
Re: She was Smiling
This story had so many things that made it great First of all, the way you describe Katrina through time, how she felt, and how she came through in the ...
Dec 25, 2015 -
Re: Terence Syndrome
Hello! This is LouBellew doing a review. This was a great short story for a couple of reasons. First, you describe Terence well and even though he's a grumpy old ...
Dec 25, 2015 -
Re: Glaciers: Prologue
Heyo! This is LouBellew. As soon as I read the description I knew I had to read this. As I read on, it got better. The way you describe your ...
Dec 24, 2015
