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LouBellew

  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: The Measure of a Hero

    This is a great story! First of all, you put in a really great message which shows through well. Second, you describe Kevin's emotions well and his motives. However, I ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Mermaid

    This story has so many good elements. Most importantly, the mood of the story is very strong. You really create the world you want the reader to be in. On ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: She was Smiling

    This story had so many things that made it great First of all, the way you describe Katrina through time, how she felt, and how she came through in the ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Terence Syndrome

    Hello! This is LouBellew doing a review. This was a great short story for a couple of reasons. First, you describe Terence well and even though he's a grumpy old ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Glaciers: Prologue

    Heyo! This is LouBellew. As soon as I read the description I knew I had to read this. As I read on, it got better. The way you describe your ...

    Dec 24, 2015


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)