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Thanks so much to everyone that's reviewed this ;) It's been a great help to me :) -Kirsten xxx and thanks to you especially Sarah, you've reviewed it twice!!!!! x

No, I've not read it, but it's in my house, actually I'm looking at it right now cuz it's in the bookshelf opposite the computer :lol: -Kirsten xxx

This is not mean to hurt anyones feelings or mock them... these town names are real. WELL THIS SHOULDN'T BE! Chapter 1. Here. Can you see a city? The city ...

I forgot to say; one of your best factors in this story was the end. It was not what we expected. We didn't know that she was a vampire until ...

Thanks Merry! :lol: It kind of got a tad messed up, at first it was going to take place during the first world war but now it's kind of more ...

Gosh I am stupid! At the bit where it says sometimes there are only colours and pictures I thought it said sometimes there are only words and pictures :lol: x

Yes, excepting is an old way to say except for x

Thankyou Demeter ;) x Yep! There's a lot of mistakes, Adelaide does become much more well developed in following chapters thank goodness ;) I don't really like the prologue that ...

Hahah yes it is, but in Wuthering Heights it's spelt Nelly and in your story it's spelt Nellie -Kirsten x

Hahah I really love your profile picture too. Sorry if that was strangely random I just had to say it :lol:

Thanks Sarah (: I know there was loads of mistakes in it, I haven't edited it yet :lol: one thing. When you say there should be a question mark after ...

No way Sarah XD :) I have no poetic-ness (not even a word but oh well!) in me. It's more like a rant than a poem ! (mine) x

Aw thanks Sarah :) Na, I'm not too nice, you're just too good :) I love your new (well, it's probably not new but I've not noticed it till now!) ...

Sorry, I accidentally posted a review with no review on it :lol: She lets go of the balloon. Wow! That's an amazing way to start the chapter. As usual Sarah ...

Thanks so much Sarah :) you're too nice! hehe I didn't mean to put Iwho in there! :) thanks :)