Lost_in_dreamland

A ghostly white mist marbles the well that the ivy guards silently. I love the imagery there of ivy ;) The water within is thirsty for my silver. Armed to ...

Namine is a dreamer, And a writer of her dreams Music and harmony Inhabit her soul. Nobody is what they call her, Everything is what she is to me. Aw; ...

I didn't write this. The words just stumble out, so... I'm not responsible if this is really, but really bad! (getting excuses for being a lousy poet, but this girl ...

I liked this. It wasn't without its flaws but the narrative is unpretentious and simple. I like that. The girl, however, I think sounds too young for her age. She ...

Anne’s crinoline skirts were completely spattered in blood. She was hunched over the deplorable figure of her mother, sprawled over the bed, sweat glistening on her forehead. Quickly, Anne turned ...

Chapter 8 The memory of the journey to Beaufort Mansion was set deep in Anne’s marrow, such was the cruel penetration of the cold embedded in her skin. 1 She ...

Hey there Casey, I'm going to review this for you seeing as you've got no reviews yet. You're new so you might not know this, but here you've got to ...

I don't suppose you'll believe that it all started with a can of coke. But then again, for quite some time, no one has really believed what ever I've said ...

The New Year will start off with a bang. People will fill the streets yet the night was already decorated with different colours. They are small unlike the anticipated fireworks ...

wrote this over a year back. Please critique harshly. Thanks! And, HappyNewYear!!! 1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They say love is an overpowering emotion. Whoever ‘they’ are coul

I hated my name, despised it beyond all belief. 1 That is why I stopped using it. Mary. It was a good name. A good, strong name. A catholic name. ...

Hanna's Holocaust; Part One. Information: These are diary entries of a little girl living through the Holocaust. She starts off at age 10 and progresses. Let me know what you ...

Written in a terrible rush, and it sure as heck shows. 1 But I needed to churn something out, however crappy, to keep me sane. 2 Chapter 7 It was ...

Hey there Angel's xD I'm Lost, and I shall be your critiquer for today :) I have numbered certain parts in bold, the parts are explained at the end in ...

Chapter 6 Anne did not desire the following day to start, but it began without her consent when the sun rose and dappled her linen curtain with apologetic rays. 1 ...