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Re: Hypocrite
This is a great piece! I like how real world and relatable this is. When you said "You wore cigarettes Like a perfume, but made me swear against smoking" I ...
May 19, 2014 - Re: Sameness May 16, 2014
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Re: When I Spin Around
Wow. I like how it was simple but had so much that i could relate to. The rhyming through out the poem was good but the last line i didn't ...
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Re: Daddy
I love this piece, it makes me very sad at the same time though but good job!
Aug 13, 2013
