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  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Hypocrite

    This is a great piece! I like how real world and relatable this is. When you said "You wore cigarettes Like a perfume, but made me swear against smoking" I ...

    May 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sameness

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: When I Spin Around

    Wow. I like how it was simple but had so much that i could relate to. The rhyming through out the poem was good but the last line i didn't ...

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Daddy

    I love this piece, it makes me very sad at the same time though but good job!

    Aug 13, 2013


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