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  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Goodbye

    Thank you.

    Jun 10, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Goodbye

    Thank you. I will.

    Jun 10, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Goodbye

    no, but he's gettin there ^^;;

    Jun 10, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Of Buses and Fridges

    I can't stop laughing....

    Jan 9, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: In Time General.

    Thank you all, please would you review my update?

    Nov 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A long day

    Day after day Year after year, I spend all my time Sitting right here. Waiting for the moment When it all goes away, I never knew one could feel this ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Begin!

    Yup, thats a poem alright. The start sounds lyrical Very dramatic I can't get past the topic though.

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Never keep a pet monster

    Stand aside Dr.Seuss! This is a nice poem, it deserves to be told in schools, and care facilities everywhere I have no bad words or suggestions other than keep on ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A long day

    ^^ glad I could be part of your feel good :D

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: No clue where to put these,

    Well Wholf's Wharf came to me while listening to Tom Wait's music, as for the scarecrow, I used to live on a farm, and they had this big scary scarecrow ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: No clue where to put these,

    Its two different poem song things, I don't even know what to call them

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodbye Blue yonder.

    Goodbye blue yonder, To my end I shall wander, I'll miss you so sweetly Goodbye blue sky Goodbye blue yonder to my end I shall wander, You cannot come with ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodbye Blue yonder.

    Yes I agree, it is definitely a cowboy poem. As for all the other parts Honestly the depth of this poem is him dying. The only thing he could depend ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodbye Blue yonder.

    Kinda reminds me of a western movie. and thanks

    Oct 10, 2011


Let yourself be silently drawn by the strange pull of what you really love. It will not lead you astray.
— Rumi