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Re: Lockdown
Hi! I would like to agree the the post above me. If the pregnant part and the gay part was also explored the story would have rocked! That was just ...
Oct 13, 2009 -
Re: The End of the World: Chapter One
Hi there! I won't go over grammar pointing since some of the reviewers already dealt with it, I'll focus more on the story plot. 1. Stretch things up: There are ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Bitten
Hi there, obviously I'm here for your review, so here it goes! Hope you won't take anything I say bad at yourself, this is just to help you improve yourself ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Eight Siblings: Could You Handle This?
Hello there, I will be posting my reviews in a generalized manner so i wouldn't sound too redundant. A. Grammar There are four things I have to say for you: ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Time is gone, it stops who it wants
Hi there, here's what I got to say for you: :D Now, as the first days melted into weeks, blooming in months and still progressing on. I still miss you. ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: It's our love story
Hi there! Before anything else, I would like to add some critiques first: One would have thought a girl would be prepared in the moment a gorgous guy It should ...
Apr 29, 2009