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Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
One would have thought a girl would be prepared in the moment a gorgous guy say 5'9" loose dark brown curly hair eyes the color of grass green and a voice of an angel walks over to her and wants to know if she is busy over the weekend. To be honest no I wasn't ready for one of the top five hottest guys in our high school class to ask me out especially when there are obviously a dozen or more girls that are far prettier, talented and cordinated than I. He's asking me out though so I feel I portray a quality the other girls lack. Could it really just be that then? As his smoldering green eyes grace into my ordinary light brown eyes I can't help but wonder if he really sees pat the outcast, over smart girl that I am. Those eyes of his have me feeling as if I could melt like a puddle onto the very floor beneth me. " I'm free" I studder. His lips turn into a grin at the corners of his mouth and replies "Great I'll pick you up around seven on Sunday" than he turns and walks away and I feel as if I could float to the very heaven above me.
Okay... well this is an interesting one. But before we dive any deeper into this story I do have to start out by saying that this is a little bit too much of a big blob of text at the moment. There's enough that happens here that you really need to be splitting this up into at the very least a couple of pieces here. At the moment its a little bit tough to follow because of the formatting.
Now moving onto the actual piece here. We've got ourselves some very interesting things going down here. Well to some extent. This is the sort of tried and tested person being asked out plan that has been used countless time, but when it is done well, I do tend to like them so here we are. This one of course appears to just be the very start here and it seems to not have too much that's terribly unique about it, so I would think a little bit more on this. Right now it seems to fulfill that particular cliche all stories of this nature will do, but its not really standing out much and you want to see a little bit of that. But overall, not a bad start here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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