Lorduncan214

I like it! But what do I not like? After all, this is a review, and if all I did was praise you it would be no help at all. ...

I like it, especially how your poem is so versatile. It doesn't have to be about focus. It could really be about anything, and that's what makes it so great. ...

Woah. That sure packs a punch. I like it. It conveys a lot of meaning into the small space. I think you did good. But this is a review, and ...

Wow. This is great. You somehow managed to stuff so much symbolism and meaning into this poem. I loved all the references, from General Lee to Jim to the repeated ...

Hello! Overall, I love it. The repetition works wonderfully in the poem; it's repetitive enough to make a statement, yet not so much so that it's boring. But, this is ...