LordofLit101

Great! I'll have a look at it, oh by the way the first two chapters of my own novel have been posted, A Scale of Power, Chapters 1 and 2, ...

Chapter 2 is done, it's also been posted.

Thanks very much! I'm currently writing Chapter 2, and of course I'll take your advice into account, but again thanks so much!

Hello! This is a rather exciting and fast paced start to your novel, I really like it! Can't wait until Chapter two, so keep up the good work. I have ...

This sent chills down my spine, I like it, very haunting and at the same time fast-paced, this is very good well done!

I must say this creates quite a powerful image, are they both being bullied? It's clear that it is from two perspectives, but I like it so far, well done!