LordofLit101

What an imaginative start to the story! Just a couple of tips: Change 'ages old door' to 'age-old door' as here it doesn't make sense. Don't capitalize 'Grumpy' as this ...

Hello, I sure can tell that this is going to be one terrific story, invasion and empires, my favourite kind of thing in a story! Just one tip: Change 'ane' ...

This is brilliant! I love how you've portrayed the future, and how you've outlined a possibility of what this present time can lead us to, but I love it, the ...

Hey Tallon, me again. I must say this is awesome! I love the way you described the whole event, it was so sinister yet so well described it felt like ...

Hello! This is a rather exciting and fast paced start to your novel, I really like it! Can't wait until Chapter two, so keep up the good work. I have ...

Hi Sarah, I'm here to red this chapter of your novel. I must say you have perfectly mirrored the attitude and personality of a person at that age, the language ...