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Re: Fears
*Looks at time* 12:43 AM Fuck why dose she have to be asleep!?!? I could just ask her for points! *looks up at ceiling* GOD WHY HAVE YOU FORSAKEN ME! ...
Jan 10, 2018 -
Re: Color Coded Feelings and Real Fake Things
Welp fuck it I'm gonna do a review. First off I really love the poem it's a great change of pace from the stuff you have been writing. Not saying ...
Dec 21, 2017 -
Re: Goofballs
REVIEW TIME! Personally to me the flow is a bit weird not bad per say it just doesn't feel quite right on the tongue. I'd say the word letters and ...
Oct 25, 2017 -
Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 4
Hay there I'm gonna do a quick little review. I really like the quote you used Well! I don't if stupid or blind but I honestly couldn't find anything wrong ...
Oct 25, 2017 -
Re: Ring Around The Rosy
Howdy! I'm gonna give you a quick review. Warning I'm bad at this. Alright here we go. Over all the poem is really good and I could notice much wrong ...
Oct 24, 2017