LordFabulous

Thank you for your advice! :) As for the foster home, you don't have to leave at 18. The parents allowed kids to stay, but the treatment they had to ...

And it's much better, you're such a good help, thank you so much!

I see what you mean there! These things don't occur to me sometimes, I shall take this into account and get back to work! James is the ideal man, and ...

Thank you for the review! I will sort out any grammar issues, and don't worry I've been planning how to make the romance more interesting, just watch out for future ...

That should look a bit better now, I removed and added bits so I hope you like it more :)

Thank you! I must admit I didn't realize how convenient that looks! I'm glad you like it and I'm sure I can sort that out so it looks more natural ...

I am very fabulous! :D

My goodness I've been away for a while, but I promise I reply to every review! I always appreciate every kind of feedback, so that I can better myself and ...

It's really good, and once historical background is sorted it will be even better! :)

Thank you for the review :) I don't know how, but I just use semi colons a lot. It only really makes sense if you have played the game before

I would appreciate that :) Thank you

Thank you friend! I'm still a learner for poetry so as you can see there are some errors :)

I did add a new verse, and I hope it helps to make things more beautiful :)

Thank you for your review! I shall add some punctuation and get to work on perhaps adding some stuff here and there, I might be able to add another verse ...

I meant me with typos being peas but i'll role with it :) I hope I corrected everything