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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forget

    Hey Lightsong Lopez18 here for a review I want to start off by saying that I love the tone in this poem. It is very dark and mysterious in a ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Keep on Trying, Keep on Flying

    Hey SnazzyPencil, Lopez18 here for a review. I want to start off by saying that I absolutely love this poem. It is very inspirational and deep. I love how you ...

    Oct 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: dear you.

    Hey AmeliaDay, Lopez18 here for a review Let me start off by saying that this poem was very touching and deep. I love how you describe the word sorry as ...

    Oct 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: A Reason of Existing [Part 1]

    Hey Lightsong, Lopez18 here for a review. Let me start off by saying that I really like the story so far. It's a very interesting plot with lots of details ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: The Finals

    Hey BEWriter, Lopez here for review I want to start off by saying that I love the imagery used in the story. It painted a clear picture in my head ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: The Trade

    I liked how you started off your story with a little bit of background about the family of the main character, but at the same time you didn't give the ...

    Oct 9, 2015


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien