Loozle

Hah, this was so cool! It was like "Romeo and Juliet" Pixar version! xD I actually had to scoot closer to the screen I got so into it. My eyes ...

"Please don’t run. You won’t be late. The Lord will meet you, At the gate." Love the ending. The only issues I have are with "Definitely don’t race;" I feel ...

Bahaha, thanks a lot, I just woke up my crabby little sister laughing! Anyway, this was super creative and silly (the combo I love the most) but it was a ...

Ok.. I see where you were trying to go with this.. but I'm not sure you got there. First of all, you definitely need to break this up. It'll make ...

I really liked this.. I'm not sure exactly what happened, but maybe that's the point..? Anyway, I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said.. punctuation etc. But ...

Oo, hm, yes, yes. *sets down lenseless glasses and smiles* I liked this. If one thing is certain, though, I can't critique to save my life. Not that there was ...

Ahh, I forgot about reading this! Well, it's a good thing I logged on for a change, now, isn't it? This is incredibly cute, and resembles my house, except the ...