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LooneyPandaxx

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: May I Have This Dance?

    hiyya LooneyPandaxx here!!! i thought this poem was really deep and has happened to me a lot. i asked my family and they said it could have been much better ...

    Sep 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Road

    hi! LooneyPandaxx here!!! i really like this poem! it really brings out your feelings and i thought it really took me on a magnificent jeorney! it was fabulous! xx :D

    Sep 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stuck Again

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! i really liked this poem. i like the way it rhymes and its really easy to understand, in the end. the only problem for me was i ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: They Whisper

    hayya! LooneyPandaxx here!!! i thought this piece was brilliant and really lovely.the only problem withit was i reallly didnt understand who 'they' were! keep wrighting!!! :D

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: 14

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! i think this poem is beautiful. its so deep and toughful.i like the unfinished sentences in the sanzas, it really puts feeling into your work. keep it ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: She's a True bestfriend

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! i really liked this piece, it really touched my heart. i also really liked the final word specialness just because it is a really comforting word and ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: drunk on the stars

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! May i say this poem is fab! the only thing i would say thats bad is that how the heck do you cross your fingers into a ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: If I Thought This Would Happen

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! i thought this poem was really sweet and it really captured my heart.i thought some of the sentences were a tiny bit long but im one of ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Want It

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! this poem is nice nd really true when you say the wanting things when you dont have something and not when you do! its awesome! :D i ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Night

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! i really like this poem. I think this poem is short but sweet and puts an image in my head of me and my boyfriend...if i had ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: When We Grow Up - Chapter One

    hi LooneyPandaxx here! i really liked first paragraph because it was really intreeging and i wanted to read more. the only problem was that the sentences wer too long, you ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Bloom

    hi! LooneyPandaxx here! i thought this piece was sad but totaly perfect! you could make it into a novel aswell. i think its really nice and it touched me inside. ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You don't care

    hiyya LooneyPandaxx here!!! i really liked your song i thought it had quite a lot of feeling in it and this might be good as song ideas for the future! ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Music is Freedom

    I really liked this piece as a hopeful music artist and thought the words really came from the heart. i thought there were no bad points to it! Its AWESOME!!! ...

    Aug 24, 2011


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