LonelyDragon

This was very well done. And Shadow Knight, everyone approaches every poem differently, where you may laugh, others may cry. Some poems are written so strongly one way that you ...

I didn't really like this, sorry. But you shouldn't be asking us to keep our critism to a minimum. That makes me not want to read your poem. :cry: The ...

I really liked this. Brings back memories. Though, maybe you could expand it? "but instead, we found worthless projector slides and empty cans to kick around while we waited on ...

This is...interesting. It reminds me of things I've randomly written into one of my many random notebooks. Silly, but it kinda pulls it off. On another note, my Mother had ...