Lonely

Thanks for the review! I can see why you interpreted the poem that way. The reason I didn't use stanzas was indeed to show how the speaker was (a little) ...

Thanks for the review :)

D'awwww thanks :3

Thank you! :)

You know, I always seem to have odd punctuation. I guess that's just a thing for me. :P Oh, and thanks for your review!

Thank you! :)

Thank you, I really appreciate your review! :D

Does this sound poetic? Maybe because I am a poet at heart. :P You were right... I lacked confidence. I just wanted to be understood, rather than have people trying ...

Thank you for your review, and I'm glad you like this piece. Oh, and the bit about the city lights lighting up the area... I wanted it to be repetitive, ...

Thank you for your review, but the theme might be a bit different from what you think ;)

Thank you for your review! I'm glad that you liked it (personally I could care less for this piece). :P

Hello! I shall now explain... The third stanza was to show that we dont have very long before we die, so we shouldn't be forming ourselves to society's standards. Thank ...

...Oopsie! I messed up that first stanza by putting isn't... Thank you for pointing that out!

Thank you for your review, and I am glad I could portray how it feels to be so alone accurately. If I can't understand how it feels, I'm not sure ...

I did make some mistakes with punctuation, didn't I? I guess I'll fix that. You also mentioned the fourth stanza and how it is practically useless. I can see your ...