LlamaDuck

Wow!

I've made some changes, they're not briliant but i'm not shakespear. (no matter how much i wish i was)

Any suggestion to replace 'stunningly' I know it's an adverb and I'm not to fond of them either but 'He looked up at the Christmas tree' seemed too blunt. Help ...

I liked it, very emotional though i wish i knew a bit more about how they lost their life of luxury and where the dad was. Did he die? Did ...