Lizette

Hello! I like it how you have written your poem. :) It shows how you marvel the stars at the universe and how amazed you are on their enchanting beauty. ...

I think you want to go back at Your First Love yet you are torn apart. You want to give the pen of your life to the Great Author yet ...

You're a great writer. :) For me, your poem speaks about freedom in the midst of shackles that tends to hinder the speaker to be himself. It's like the speaker ...

I like your poem very much! :) I'll be waiting for your next one. :D