Liz

You had some great images in here. That was what made the poem. However, I think you need to fix up the ending and maybe expand it a little. Not ...

Excuse me?

Yep, short and sweet. You really captured the mood. However, I too didn't like the "planet we call home" line. Just didn't seem to fit. But apart from that, good ...

Good work, I like it. Very well-written and a fair storyline. You probably could have developed the character a little more, whcih would have been easier with a longer piece ...

Not too bad at all. I didn't really like the lines with the three words connected by full-stops, but apart from that, good work. You'd probably want a more solid ...

Good concept, nicely-written. "My frostbit toes" Should it be "frost-bitten"? Anyway, great work, I really like this one.

Great. Good theme, easily to relate to, and well-written. Nice work.

Yep, I really like it. Original, well-written. Good work.

Okay...but yeah, you might want to break some lines up. It was painful for me to read, the way it was set up. You also might want to check over ...

Beautiful. I can't say much more.

Yeah, some grammar revision wouldn't go astray but overall this was really good. The tone is great. Nice work.

Wow, great. So personal yet I can really relate. Amazing work.

I like it. Great idea, great tone. Good work.

This is really good. I think it dragged on for a bit too long, but overall it was extremely well-written. Good job.

Packed to the brim with cliches! Try to be more original.