Liz

I like it, I thought it was original and it kept me hooked. But yeah, the "Wearing the jacket around my slender sleek shoulders" sort of threw the rhythm and ...

I like them...interesting. :)

It was okay. Pretty well-written, but fix up your spelling. didn't seem very memorable to me, it needs something original.

It stopped there because that's the end. Thanks :)

I loved this. It's beautiful, honest, raw, and it really hit me. Nice one.

simple, rhythmic, sweet. not much else, but it had a nice touch in it that i thought was good to read.

Great. Emotive. Well done.

Hmmm...a tough subject to write about because of all the baggage you have to deal with. I quite liked it, I just think it needed a little more to it ...

I quite like it, but I agree with Sabine: it's kind of meaningless and doesn't convey much of a point. However, the language and images are beautiful, so that more ...

I really like it. Powerful and emotional without being confessional poetry. Nice way to express a real-life situation, in a narrative form. It was a pretty original metaphor too. Good ...

I like it, and I'm sure you could wring some truth out of it if you tried. Nice work.

Thanks. The narrator alternates in who she's talking to: 1, 3 and 5 are to herself; her musings. 2 and 4 are to "friends".

Yeah, it's all linked under a common theme. They have different times because they're supposed to be about seperate times, although all about one specific time the person is going ...

:( You know what I mean. I really liked this is there anymore to it or is it just a short story kind of thing? Yeah, it's an allegory. Basically ...

I really liked this is there anymore to it or is it just a short story kind of thing? Yeah, it's an allegory. Basically it demonstrates the high flash of ...