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Re: Wicked the Musical
I can't say I've ever seen the musical itself in person, but I do enjoy the novel of it. Well, I mean, what I've read of it so far. I'm ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Escape To Fate - Part One
Hihi. everything seemed to fall apart by the seems. I'm pretty sure it's 'seams' rather than 'seems' in this particular usage. :) I have always lived here in the sunny ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral And Hard Working - That's Me!
Aweee, poor ant. The point of view was a good one, and this certainly was an enjoyable read. :) I couldn't really find any grammatical errors. Overall, good job!
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: The Romanov (Prologue)
Hihi. I found your novel by browsing through the 'Novels & Novellas' page. The main reason I picked yours was because of your synopsis, which stood out. :) Anyways, to ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: All Along the Way - Chapter 1
Hihi. :) I met Natasha when we were in the third grade. I had just turned nine. I remember being jealous because Natasha had been nine for a whole 6 ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: The Flowers Have Seams
Sarebear seems to have already handled the grammatical and spelling aspects well, so I'm just going to go on to my overall feel of the piece. :) For the most ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Still Doll Prologue - We Are Artwork
But my life isn’t a perfect picture or a beautiful ballad. No one’s is. I learned that when I turned seventeen. The 'No one's is.' should be 'No ones is.' ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Through These Eyes Chapter I
'Ello~ I shall be reviewing for you today. I prefer to do this line by line (if a a change in that line is needed anyway), then give an overall ...
Jun 20, 2011
