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LittleWriter14

LittleWriter14

  • Poetry » General, General Re: in the forest of illusion

    Hi! To start what you've written is beautiful! I enjoyed your poem. I really liked your word choice and comparisons throughout the work. i can almost hear the sound of ...

    Nov 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Just Write

    Hi Ghost, To start, you have a way with words. You are quite good at evoking emotion from your audience. As an aspiring writer, I found this bit of poetry ...

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Pure Terror

    Hi, I was very amused by this short little story! It kept me entertained from the very beginning. You seem to focus on mainly drama in your works, I'm glad ...

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Girl in the Coffee Shop

    Hello! First off, wow. Just wow... By the end I was actually moved to tears. You have a gift. The story was very good, also sad but that's why it ...

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Broken House

    Hi! I enjoyed this story. I love how you wrote from the point of view of the house. It gave the whole story an interesting aspect. The imagery used is ...

    Nov 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Electric Dessert

    Hello! I think you did a very nice job with this short story. It definitely fits well in the dramatic category! I can't say that I have ever been in ...

    Nov 3, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alone in the Woods

    Hi! First off I would like to say that I enjoyed your short story. I also enjoy taking a walk through the woods every now an then, letting nature surround ...

    Nov 3, 2016


One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World