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Re: in the forest of illusion
Hi! To start what you've written is beautiful! I enjoyed your poem. I really liked your word choice and comparisons throughout the work. i can almost hear the sound of ...
Nov 7, 2016 -
Re: Just Write
Hi Ghost, To start, you have a way with words. You are quite good at evoking emotion from your audience. As an aspiring writer, I found this bit of poetry ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: Pure Terror
Hi, I was very amused by this short little story! It kept me entertained from the very beginning. You seem to focus on mainly drama in your works, I'm glad ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: The Girl in the Coffee Shop
Hello! First off, wow. Just wow... By the end I was actually moved to tears. You have a gift. The story was very good, also sad but that's why it ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: The Broken House
Hi! I enjoyed this story. I love how you wrote from the point of view of the house. It gave the whole story an interesting aspect. The imagery used is ...
Nov 4, 2016 -
Re: Electric Dessert
Hello! I think you did a very nice job with this short story. It definitely fits well in the dramatic category! I can't say that I have ever been in ...
Nov 3, 2016 -
Re: Alone in the Woods
Hi! First off I would like to say that I enjoyed your short story. I also enjoy taking a walk through the woods every now an then, letting nature surround ...
Nov 3, 2016
