LittleLuciano

This is so cleverly written! I think it talks about how we aer so apart from the ones we love. But what I like about this poem is how you ...

I love this poem! The imagery is really good, I can imagine every single thing that happens in each stanza. I also like the ABCB rhyme pattern, and it must ...

Normally I see poems that rhyme throughout the poem, so this was a nice change. I think what the poem is about is pretty obvious, so I'll leave that out. ...

This is amazing, the rhythm and rhyme are absolutely perfect in the poem! I think the meaning of the poem is very obvious: how you're in the middle of a ...

I absolutely adore this poem! I like the rhythm of it, and as someone said before, the rhyme doesn't sound forced at all. The point of the poem is very ...

I like the repetition of Not just a memory Not just a though Not just some item that can be bought at the beginning and at the end of the ...

The only nitpick I have is this: "And they echo endlessly, though they'll never find" I think it should be two separate lines. Apart from that, I like the poem. ...

I'm just going to re-write it and explain as I go. Why is it that suddenly, The word random is misused here. I think suddenly sounds better until you find ...