LittleLee

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Thanks for the review! The idea behind the capitalization is to show that Seraphina idolizes the High Priest, but I kept forgetting to capitalize. So thanks for pointing that out. ...

I read your reply to MoonIris, and see why you did that now, but I thought that other than being visually pleasing, to me capitalization adds gravity. It feels as ...

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Thank you so much for the review! I'm not sure myself, but thanks for pointing it out. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

There should be an edit option on the top of the page, so you can try fixing it.

Ah, okay.

Also, why do you choose to write in italics?

It's fine, don't worry! I think adding more content to each chapter, more detailed descriptions, and a slower pace will really set you off. I'll keep reviewing your work! I'm ...

:D Would you like to be tagged for the next chapter?

Thanks for the review! Sheesh, there are a lot of typos, I need to correct that. But your second point was off; the sentence is grammatically correct. If I change ...

Sure thing. :D

Hey Elinor, Thanks for everything! I suppose him inheriting the throne is slightly weak. I'll try working on it and add some other things to clarify everything. I'm glad you ...

Thank you for the review, Felistia! You've inspired me to post the next parts of my book, although chapter two's up, so yay!