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Re: Lost Things
Hey zenith, Lee's here to review your poem! Wow. It's amazing. i could go on and on about how the lines and illustrations are beautiful, but I'll begin with a ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: To School
Hi! I'm Lee, and here to review your poem! It was amazing, really well-written and thought provoking. However, there are a few things I'd like to point out before I ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: Path to Diagnosis Part One
Hi DeliriumNervosa, I'm Lee and here to drop off a review. First of all, I just want to say I can relate, at least partially. I struggled with my weight ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: Final Initiation
Hey, sandayselkie, I'm Lee, and I'm here to review your story. It was fast-paced, full of action, and fairly exciting to read. The descriptions are very well written and none ...
Jun 27, 2020 -
Re: Blame
Hey, Gravitem! I can't write a long review for this, it's too short and pretty good in any case. However, the thought of this sitting forever in the Green Room ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: Hostages
Hi there, and welcome to the site! I'm Lee, and here to drop off a quick review. Firstly, you have great grammar. I could find very few mistakes , and ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: Entry 3 - Heather
Hi, Lee here for a quick and short review! The first thing I noticed is the reference to the rice table. You mentioned it in your last poem too, and ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: We only live -once- twice
Hi there, Raichu! I'm Lee, and I'm here to review your piece. I think it's an essay, not a short story; you can change that by editing this work in ...
Jun 24, 2020 -
Re: Entry 2 - What If I'm Wrong?
Hi Cow, Wow, this poem really brought up memories! Especially the thing about rice; I still do that whenever I can. Okay, I'll quickly run through whatever I think you ...
Jun 23, 2020 -
Re: The Court Jester and the Baker Boy
Hey there, Em16, here comes Lee to review your poem! I'll begin right away. I read this poem last night, and I was swept away by it. It's beautiful, absolutely ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: Entry 1 - Cow Eyes.
Watashi ga kita (again)! Going to drop a quick review. First of all, I love the feeling behind the poem. It's so sweet and so delicate, you've done a nice ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: Story III - Twenty-Three Knives
Hi, Cow! Wow, this made for a really good read! I enjoyed the narration and the descriptive writing. The comparisons were well made and the emotions in the lines suited ...
Jun 21, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1 - I'm Thinking
WATASHI GA KITA!!! Haha. I'll get right on with the review. The things I liked will be pointed out in the ending. Once again, I'm sorry if i come off ...
Jun 20, 2020 -
Re: Story II - Crown of Ashes
Hi Cow, here I come with a review! It isn't half as bad as you think! You've done a pretty good job, considering you wrote it on the spot and ...
Jun 20, 2020 -
Re: blank
Hi, Adu05, here I come to review your poem! It's a smallish review, I hope you don't mind. It's very short and simple, and I really liked that. it was ...
Jun 19, 2020
