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LittleLee

Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination.

  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lost Things

    Hey zenith, Lee's here to review your poem! Wow. It's amazing. i could go on and on about how the lines and illustrations are beautiful, but I'll begin with a ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: To School

    Hi! I'm Lee, and here to review your poem! It was amazing, really well-written and thought provoking. However, there are a few things I'd like to point out before I ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Health, General Re: Path to Diagnosis Part One

    Hi DeliriumNervosa, I'm Lee and here to drop off a review. First of all, I just want to say I can relate, at least partially. I struggled with my weight ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Final Initiation

    Hey, sandayselkie, I'm Lee, and I'm here to review your story. It was fast-paced, full of action, and fairly exciting to read. The descriptions are very well written and none ...

    Jun 27, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blame

    Hey, Gravitem! I can't write a long review for this, it's too short and pretty good in any case. However, the thought of this sitting forever in the Green Room ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Hostages

    Hi there, and welcome to the site! I'm Lee, and here to drop off a quick review. Firstly, you have great grammar. I could find very few mistakes , and ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Entry 3 - Heather

    Hi, Lee here for a quick and short review! The first thing I noticed is the reference to the rice table. You mentioned it in your last poem too, and ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: ​We only live -once- twice

    Hi there, Raichu! I'm Lee, and I'm here to review your piece. I think it's an essay, not a short story; you can change that by editing this work in ...

    Jun 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Entry 2 - What If I'm Wrong?

    Hi Cow, Wow, this poem really brought up memories! Especially the thing about rice; I still do that whenever I can. Okay, I'll quickly run through whatever I think you ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Court Jester and the Baker Boy

    Hey there, Em16, here comes Lee to review your poem! I'll begin right away. I read this poem last night, and I was swept away by it. It's beautiful, absolutely ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Entry 1 - Cow Eyes.

    Watashi ga kita (again)! Going to drop a quick review. First of all, I love the feeling behind the poem. It's so sweet and so delicate, you've done a nice ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Story III - Twenty-Three Knives

    Hi, Cow! Wow, this made for a really good read! I enjoyed the narration and the descriptive writing. The comparisons were well made and the emotions in the lines suited ...

    Jun 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter 1 - I'm Thinking

    WATASHI GA KITA!!! Haha. I'll get right on with the review. The things I liked will be pointed out in the ending. Once again, I'm sorry if i come off ...

    Jun 20, 2020
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Story II - Crown of Ashes

    Hi Cow, here I come with a review! It isn't half as bad as you think! You've done a pretty good job, considering you wrote it on the spot and ...

    Jun 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: blank

    Hi, Adu05, here I come to review your poem! It's a smallish review, I hope you don't mind. It's very short and simple, and I really liked that. it was ...

    Jun 19, 2020


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality