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Re: Drowning in Torment (A poorly written sonnet)
Hey Jesse, Lee's here to review your work! I liked reading this poem. It was fairly simple and straightforward. There are some nice images, and some good diction. I'm going ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: In support of ThisIsLegacy
Hey, Stream, I'm here to review your poem. It is a very sensitive and personal topic, so I will avoid commenting on that other than to say it seems like ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: Entry 6 - Fairy Tales and Flies
I'm dropping a review right away. I'll get to what I liked after I nitpick; please don't be offended if I'm too critical, I'm just trying to help you out! ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: Apologies
Hi, quitecontrary, I'm here to drop off a review. I want to say this before I begin nitpicking: it's a wonderful, lyrical poem that really struck me. You certainly have ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: His questionable love
Hi, PeculiarGypsy! I'm Lee, and here to review your AHAHAHAWESOME poem. Seriously, at the end I began laughing so hard my stomach cramped. I was thinking, "It seems like a ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: ​Chapter 1 The not so great Jimmy
Hello, pizzapocket17, I'm Lee! Welcome to the site. I'm here to review your story. Before I begin, I want to say that if my review comes off as too critical, ...
Jun 29, 2020 -
Re: The lost katana queen.
Hi Eros, I'm here to review your poem. This is a very sensitive and painful topic. Good thing you put the warning up. This poem was extremely triggering to me, ...
Jun 29, 2020 -
Re: NO!
Hey, Thisislegacy, I'm Lee. This poem is really well-written, and it clearly comes from the heart. Throughout it I can sense the bubbling emotions and the sense of freedom you ...
Jun 29, 2020 -
Re: Nameless Relations
Hello, Eros, I'm Lee, and here to review your poem. It was a touching piece, in all honesty. Loneliness and introversion are delicate matters, and you've portrayed them well. I'll ...
Jun 29, 2020 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Hey Messenger, I'm Lee and I'm here to review your chapter! I haven't read any of the others, so please excuse me. I'll stick to reviewing this one chapter alone ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: The Sculptor's Knife: Chapter 6.1
Hello, redvictory. I'm here to review your chapter! I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll stick to reviewing everything other than the plot. Let me begin without further ado. ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Eighteen
Hi there felistia! I haven't read the earlier chapters of your novel, so I'm just going to review based on any grammatical errors or poor sentence construction that I find. ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: Mrs Jones - chapter 13
Hey there, heffa89, I'm Lee and here to review your work. I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so I don't know anything about the characters or plot. Because ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: 2 Blank Verses
Hey there IamI, I'm here to drop a review on your poems! First of all, you've done a really good job. The syllable count is solid and your diction is ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: Path to Diagnosis Part Two
Here I am to review the second part of your diagnosis. Tuck's already said it, but this seems like a piece you could put up on your blog, since it's ...
Jun 28, 2020
