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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Drowning in Torment (A poorly written sonnet)

    Hey Jesse, Lee's here to review your work! I liked reading this poem. It was fairly simple and straightforward. There are some nice images, and some good diction. I'm going ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: In support of ThisIsLegacy

    Hey, Stream, I'm here to review your poem. It is a very sensitive and personal topic, so I will avoid commenting on that other than to say it seems like ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Entry 6 - Fairy Tales and Flies

    I'm dropping a review right away. I'll get to what I liked after I nitpick; please don't be offended if I'm too critical, I'm just trying to help you out! ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Apologies

    Hi, quitecontrary, I'm here to drop off a review. I want to say this before I begin nitpicking: it's a wonderful, lyrical poem that really struck me. You certainly have ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: His questionable love

    Hi, PeculiarGypsy! I'm Lee, and here to review your AHAHAHAWESOME poem. Seriously, at the end I began laughing so hard my stomach cramped. I was thinking, "It seems like a ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: ​Chapter 1 The not so great Jimmy

    Hello, pizzapocket17, I'm Lee! Welcome to the site. I'm here to review your story. Before I begin, I want to say that if my review comes off as too critical, ...

    Jun 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The lost katana queen.

    Hi Eros, I'm here to review your poem. This is a very sensitive and painful topic. Good thing you put the warning up. This poem was extremely triggering to me, ...

    Jun 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: NO!

    Hey, Thisislegacy, I'm Lee. This poem is really well-written, and it clearly comes from the heart. Throughout it I can sense the bubbling emotions and the sense of freedom you ...

    Jun 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Nameless Relations

    Hello, Eros, I'm Lee, and here to review your poem. It was a touching piece, in all honesty. Loneliness and introversion are delicate matters, and you've portrayed them well. I'll ...

    Jun 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 23

    Hey Messenger, I'm Lee and I'm here to review your chapter! I haven't read any of the others, so please excuse me. I'll stick to reviewing this one chapter alone ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Literature Re: The Sculptor's Knife: Chapter 6.1

    Hello, redvictory. I'm here to review your chapter! I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll stick to reviewing everything other than the plot. Let me begin without further ado. ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Eighteen

    Hi there felistia! I haven't read the earlier chapters of your novel, so I'm just going to review based on any grammatical errors or poor sentence construction that I find. ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Mrs Jones - chapter 13

    Hey there, heffa89, I'm Lee and here to review your work. I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so I don't know anything about the characters or plot. Because ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2 Blank Verses

    Hey there IamI, I'm here to drop a review on your poems! First of all, you've done a really good job. The syllable count is solid and your diction is ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Other » Health, General Re: Path to Diagnosis Part Two

    Here I am to review the second part of your diagnosis. Tuck's already said it, but this seems like a piece you could put up on your blog, since it's ...

    Jun 28, 2020


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