LittleCaroleen

I like the innocence of the poem. It's very sweet. However there are some errors you should double check on. The flow and the consistency of the poem is a ...

Hi. I love any poems about change, because it happens so often and few people ever want to talk about it. I like how it's just a single drop of ...

I love this a lot. I like it's depth and complexity. The comparisons are really interesting to. You say that they can't deceive, but perhaps they are? Are they really ...

I love this, it's very catchy. It would be interesting to see you add more to it, but it doesn't need it. The rhyming seems a little forced, but not ...

Such a good poem. I love the message behind it and everything. It's a little catchy and cliche, but I also think that's what makes it so good. It's a ...

Okay, this poem is good, but it needs a lot of improvement in structure. First of all when you go on to the next line you should always capitalize the ...

The rhyming of this poem, is good and I generally like it. However, I don't understand how the "snow" turns to fire? Or was it simply just the soot falling ...

This story is very good. It goes into every women's worst nightmare. I enjoyed reading it immensely, as I enjoy reading stories about suffering, and sadness. However, there were a ...