Linx

Hiya, I am representing peanut right now, so pretend that I am her. :D Peanut is grounded, so that is why she hasn't been on in a while. She told ...

I do plan on writing more, so I will try to describe her dad and Dave more. They are two important characters. I will try posting it as soon as ...

No, Meep, don't feel like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are not immature, you just say you are not good on the mushy and gushy parts. It's ok! Don't worry about what we ...

Oh, sorry Meep. Usually when I don't know how to spell a word, I type it in my computer under Word. If it gets the red underline thingy, I know ...

Thanks guys! I will try fixing it as soon as I can! I have free time after school on Thursday, so I can hopefully do it then. Thanks again. I ...

Ok peanut, you explained most of this at school to me, and yet I still don't get some of it. They are not in front of a castle. Ayden mysteriously ...

Thanks everyone for the reviews. What I got from all of that was, I need more description. Still. I will try editing it soon. I've been working on Ch. 1 ...

Thank you, WrittenSoul and Kaylyn. I really needed more opinions on this, cuz just having peanut at school read it doesn't really help. I will try making it clearer, and ...

I liked it. I agree totally with the post before me. Just right for the introduction. I can't wait to see what you do with this!!! :D

Thank you! Sometimes, these poems are the only things that kept me from losing it. Thank you again! :D

Thanks everyone. I know alot of you guys (I was about to y'all, but that's not really proper) said I need to add more description. As I re-read the story ...