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I hadn't read the Bible in a while and was also looking for inspiration for my novel. Thus I decided to read where I had left off in 2 Kings. ...

Thanks for your reply and explanation of the sky metaphor. Furthermore, I'm glad I wasn't being simple with my comment on the stars and sky. I don't like missing the ...

There's no more room for reviews here, but I want you to know this is great.

So you're an e. e. Cummings sort, I see, hehe. Have a good one!

Thanks much, Rae! I plan to get on it soon. I've just recently been busy with school starting, but I'm eager to implement your suggestions. God bless you, and thanks ...

You are completely right in probably everything you said. I'll explain myself some more and wait for your response. First, yes, it is an "info dump." My reasons for doing ...

I want to comment that because I am a Christian naturally this story includes God. I didn't want to list it in the "spiritual" category because I wasn't sure how ...

Bwah, I meant to say "you're."

Well, although I disagreed with you, I must say your a good, persistent writer. Peace out, Pacifist! (How redundant, hehe!)

Also, I added paragraphs. Yay! Thanks.

I just read my review, and I hope I didn't sound too harsh on you. Though I disliked the poem, you have talent, dear writer. I don't think my review ...

Maybe I will put it in the forums. That's good advice.

Thanks for the advice, Romania. I just changed the setup by adding numbers to separate thoughts. No, you're right about the grammar. I just became confused somehow. I know. I ...

Thanks, Kelpies. Your review is helpful and gives me hope.

I had meant to add the final quotation mark, my bad. I will resolve the problems with the quotations. Thanks for telling me. I can't get anything by people on ...