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Thanks for the good review, Siageo. I'll keep on writing it.

You earned it by drawing my attention with your other poem. Nonetheless, I was happy to read this.

As much I am inclined to be negative about this, it's all right.

I have to agree with penprincess: do remove the second "but." Doing that would make the wording more appealing and natural.

So many reviews have already been submitted that I won't write one, but I like this and find the cockiness of the speaker amusing.

I'm glad to hear that.

It's going to be difficult for me to review this without chapter 2, but I'll do my best.

You're right about the limerick form. My bad--I'll try to convert it to the proper form. Thanks for keeping me and the world of literature accountable in a time when ...

I applaud your upholding the standard. Thanks much! I will refine this.

Cool!

Yes, the predicament of any writer with good stories to tell--bridging the gaps. I hope you make some solid progress with yours.

I don't know what this is about, but it's good.

Wow, this is not what I expected, but well-done!

Hey Aley, thank you for that long, well-formed reply. I don't often that kind of response, and I appreciate it. I'll try to explain myself in this reply. I understand ...

Thanks for the review. You're right a football field doesn't have a 55-yard line--my bad. I'll reword that. Actually, I checked football rules on a NFL.com; and a field goal ...