Linguistic

Again, thank you for the amazing feedback :) I agree with the description of the boy - I may have gotten a tad bit carried away with his glorious (soon ...

Oooh! So, personally, I've had panic attacks many times before and often am able to recover quite well (maybe not as quickly as Adira does, but still, not too bad) ...

Thank you! I fixed some of the things you mentioned

Thank you for reading :) I'm glad you could empathize with Ember a little because I especially wanted to make her a relatable character to everyone, and not just people ...

Haha, yes, I do use a lot of brackets. I'm trying to get out of the habit but they're just so fun to me. Thank you for reading! I'm so ...

Thank you! Everything you commented will definitely help me better shape this chapter and the ones to come :) thank you for reading, and for the help. I'll try to ...

Thank you! I didn't think the feedback would be this positive, so I'm beyond excited that you liked it so much :) I tried to make it as relatable as ...

Is there supposed to be something here? I was planning on doing a review because the title sounds really cool, but I clicked on the link and there is nothing...? ...

You helped a lot, thank you :) I needed some solid feedback on this and you were able to deliver

Thank you again for yet another amazing review. This one will also be very helpful. As for the banging, I totally understand how it could be confusing. The part actually ...

Thank you so much! This will be a massive help because I really wanted an in-depth review on the technicalities of the chapter as well as the content. Thanks for ...

Thank you! :) I'm really glad I could pull you in

Yes, it's definitely unfamiliar because this is sort of an inserted background chapter that I'm putting in between the action chapter of when Adira finds the muddy letter taped to ...

Thank you! That means a lot :) I also feel like depriving the reader of information is a better route to take, but not everyone likes being left in the ...

And the "one, two, three - hitting sixty..." Thing was supposed to add to the allusion of time. She can physically feel the time passing as well as seeing it. ...