LilySoulMahon

Wow, I love this. Short and sweet and emotional. I feel the pain yet also the power the person feels at the end for being done. However, I would like ...

Wow, this was quickly writen?? Thats actually hard to believe as its an amazing piece. The detail in it is writen perfectly and it kept me reading to the end ...

Wow, a beautiful piece of poetry. I love the imagery in it, and also yet again its simple yet powerful. I love: Cradled by the Lustrous sunset? Its so amazing. ...

Wow. Thats quite a powerful piece. Some really strong imagery, it kept me reading and I really did like the structure. Though I also felt it was missing something. You're ...

I really liked this, its quite a powerful piece. The imagery is really strong and you have some good descriptions, though I think you could add more. I also like ...

Wow, a really powerful piece. I love the structure of it and it brings back lots of good views that some may have forgotten. Its a really good subject to ...

Haha, this really made me giggle and I loved its descriptive ways. Its structure is really well thought out aswell. It puts across some strong views. You should really submit ...

I really liked this poem. I do however, feel like it could be expanded on and find some immature comments quite rubbish. I found its simplicity quite relaxing and enjoyable. ...

Hey I really enjoyed this poem. It flowed well and kept me reading. The only thing I will point out is you're "I" 's, you need to capitalize them or ...

I really enjoyed these chapters and I really think you should write more of these. Serious talent and possibility here, i'm not just saying that. I do think more detail ...

This is really good! You have a talent in writing, haha. The Zombie idea you played I origionally thought was just going to be overplayed but I really like how ...

A really good piece of poetry. Its shows emotion and I love the imagery used. Though I would have loved to have read more and a little bit more detail ...

I really liked this piece of poetry. It was really emotional and quite a strong piece. Though I didnt think it flowed as best as it could. It seemed a ...

Wow, I loved this piece of poetry. The structure was well done and it kept me reading and didnt let my mind wander. You used detail well and I felt ...

I liked this. Its a strong emotional piece. Its also short and sweet. Kept me reading though I did gain a little bit of confusion at the begining but once ...